keo
Genin
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Post by keo on Nov 19, 2006 18:51:09 GMT -5
Name:Keo Uzumaki Age:13 Birthday:October/10/1993 Gender:Male Height:5'4 Weight:103 Hair/ Eyes:Black hair and Red eyes Appearance:Like naruto but with black hair and red eyes wears a black sweater,red shirt and black pants has a red byakkugan Special Item:Giant Katana Rank:Genin Yen:5000 Chakra:1000 History:Keo is son of Naruto and Hinata and brother of Utoran,he and his brother were born with a little bit of Kyuubi inside of them(kyuubi's baby's LOL) do to his dad having the kyuubi inside of him.Keo was struggling in the academy like his father in the clone jutsu,but he finally passed it after 2 years and couldn't be with his brother because he graduated in 3 years! Quote:"Believe it"(like father like son) Hobbies:Training,Fighting,Eating Ramen,Learning new techniques,and using his byakkugan Description:Keo is alot like his dad,Naruto and a little like his mother.
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Post by Haruka on Nov 19, 2006 18:57:11 GMT -5
First take out the Naruto Hinata things.. Go into accepted characters and look at the histories. As a first attempt this is good, but it needs more history.Specific events, trauma, family, friends, personality
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Post by ageaol on Nov 28, 2006 2:47:57 GMT -5
Naruto and Hinata had a family... Lol.
Let's see... Even if they DID have a family, none of the Uzumaki brats would end up in Boketsugakure. They'd all be in Konoha, probably under ANBU guard.
Second, how does he have a Red Byakugan? The Byakugan is white! A red Byakugan means the genes for his eyes are different than a normal Byakugan, so his Red Byakugan probably wouldn't even work properly.
Kyuubi is sealed inside Naruto. They didn't do any freaky fusion thing to somehow make Naruto part demon. Since Naruto is 100% human, any child of his would not have any kind of demonic powers.
Lastly, nobody cannot be like both Naruto AND Hinata. Their personalities are like polar opposites. The only way that would work is if Keo had a split personality. If that were the case, he wouldn't be a genin, but a proud member of Boketsugakure's mental institute.
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Sasuke
Chunin
Come to me Light....seek my power that you crave
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Post by Sasuke on Nov 28, 2006 20:50:05 GMT -5
OMG MIND YOU OWN BUISSNES!
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